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water sport narrative draft 1

Task Description: this was really fun the easy part  was the ideas the hard part was that we had to write a story but I am still happy.

Scott and Stiles were just walking and they saw something getting set up at the beach so they asked what this is and they said it was a water race so scott  asked can I play sure you just need to write this form and he did he asked stiles if he is going to play and said no you know I am scared of water I will just watch. then when scott finished his form he asked when it starts and they said right now and he said you should go now so scott went to get changed. They went back and saw lots of people and also  his crush and the crew that was playing jack and allison were just  gonna watch and the others were players. Then it started,  we lied  on the line and  then they ran  scott was in first place but the others cheated with jetskis  he tried to keep up but they were to fast and there was a problem more of the water was getting higher and higher on his body the more he keeped going and then he finally went under water then he was losing oxygen so he just let him self lose oxygen to die then suddenly a whale saw him and boosted to him and made him go up and he woke up to see the others and a dolphin that was so fast and then he was second place. The one in 1st place was joshua he was my high school bully and then scott catched up and was saying he is gonna win and joshua said now and then he went faster than ever before then he saw the line and looked back and joshua was catching up then Scott made the last move and he won and he was so happy and made are new friend and Scott lived happy ever after.